Shortly after starting this book I realized something was off. It just didn't flow as well as the previous books, and honestly wasn't as interesting. I did some research and turns out my intuition was right. Apparently as Martin was writing this book, he realized that it was becoming too large. Instead of splitting it into parts, he decided to split the story and have two books following the same timeline simultaneously. A Feast For Crows follows characters near King's Landing and Westeros. A Dance With Dragons (which I am reading now) is the other book on the timeline, which follows characters north of the Wall and in Essos. The issue with this approach is that at this point in time, most of the main characters are no longer in King's Landing. Cersei and Jaime Lannister are the two biggest characters remaining. There's no Jon Snow (he was never in King's Landing), no Tyrion, no Daenerys, etc. You get the point. Leaving most of the major characters out of the book was a ballsy decision by Martin, and I think the book suffered because of the decision. It's not a bad book per se, but definitely is not as good as the books in the series up to this point. There are several lengthy chapters following Brienne of Tarth as she searches for Sansa (her and Littlefinger are also in Westeros and thus in the book) and Samwell Tarly as he journeys from the Wall to Oldtown. Obviously these chapters are not as interesting as a chapter about Tyrion.
Having Cersei and Jaime as the book's main characters is problematic too. After Joffrey's death, the council and mainstay side characters in King's Landing are all different now. Even though Joffrey was a jerk, he was at least interesting. Tommen is basically a non-factor as a character. Most of Cersei's story in this book revolves around setting up the new council and dealing with their incompetence, which isn't exactly thrilling stuff. Jaime is sent to the Riverlands to deal with the remaining Lords who don't support Tommen. This is a similar situation in that, much like the council, we've got unfamiliar people in familiar locations, but their lack of familiarity makes it somewhat difficult to care all that much.
The tide of good fortune begins to change for Cersei, however, by the end of the book. The religious zealots the Sparrows have infiltrated King's Landing. Cersei attempts to frame Margaery Tyrell for infidelity against Tommen. However, the Sparrows catch Cersei's lie and imprison her. With Tywin dead and the rest of her family no longer supporting her, Cersei's smugness finally gets the best of her. This is the most interesting and important part of this book, and it will be interesting to see what happens to her and the Lannister family moving forward.











